Reviewer:
cry0fan -
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April 3, 2005
Subject:
keep trying
This one was a bit of a dud, sorry to say. But a good try. A good start.
One thing you can do is leave the text up on the screen longer. Some of it went way even faster than Evelyn Wood could read it.
THe main problem was that the logic of your message was broken. You did not produce any evidence suggestive enough to support your thesis. You just threw up some sort of a loose chain of conspiracy theory stuff.
I am working on a series of documentaries of a nature somewhat similar to what you did here. I can tell you that it takes a lot of time and work to put together a script and video/audio/facts substantial enough to support a thesis of this nature. You have to do research. You have to make points at each juncture of your video.
Your video was just a loose compilation of Democratic Internet activist, BFEE conspiracy tropes. What has been going on is a lot more than just BUSH/GOP and Clinton, dammit. This kind of stuff has been going on for 300 years.
Sigh....
But a good start! Keep at it. You need to do more serious reading--not just posts on forums online. Read some of the more detailed background sources that are cited on some of these forums you are reading. That is where the real juice is.....
Good luck!